User talk:Hiku64

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pavement Entertainment (February 3)
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joe deckertalk 01:25, 3 February 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pavement Entertainment (February 9)
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SwisterTwister  talk  21:21, 9 February 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pavement Entertainment (March 16)
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Mr. Guye (talk) 12:07, 16 March 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Hiku64 (talk) 20:53, 16 March 2017 (UTC) Thank you for your input. I tried to make the page less promotional and got rid of words like "featured," which may have been the peacocking you were talking about. I also added some more factual sources, like a metal encyclopedia, but couldn't find anymore big newspaper articles. Hopefully, my draft is okay this time around.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Pavement Entertainment (April 12)
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Yashovardhan (talk) 12:38, 12 April 2017 (UTC)

Draft:Pavement Entertainment concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Pavement Entertainment, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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