User talk:Hilarynwilson/sandbox

Response to Hena's Peer Review
Thank you for the peer review! (Is in Hena's Sandbox) So far I have only addressed the main problem with the Pluton article which is there is no clear defenition for a pluton. Yes diagrams will be a welcome addition and I will look for some that I can use, I will also look into restructuring the whole article. The methods of pluton emplacement was an edit for a different article that I will be linking to the Pluton article. I am trying to figure out the correct formatting for Wikepedia and then hopefully everything will make more sense. Hilarynwilson (talk) 15:46, 1 March 2019 (UTC)

Response to Ben's Peer Review
Thank you for the peer review! (In Ben's Sandbox) I don't want to go into too much detail on the formation of plutons as there is another Wikipedia article that is for that topic. Instead I want to mention the occurrences of plutons and the possible types there are. The definition of a pluton was a very important part for this article as it was seriously lacking in the original article. Hilarynwilson (talk) 15:58, 1 March 2019 (UTC)

Comment from TA
My only comment is that it would be good to identify a few more aspects in the pluton page that could be expanded up. If you are having trouble finding additional information to add to the pluton page then you may also consider adding information to one of the "see also" pages listed. --TA ERTH4303 (talk) 15:43, 12 March 2019 (UTC)