User talk:Hillsbells


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The Hills Grammar School
I've removed the sections you just added in again. It wasn't me the first time, but they should have explained why...

The language in those sections seems a little bit promotional as if it's written as part of an advertisement for the school. It needs to be reworded in a way that conveys neutrality. If you can do anything about this, that'd be great. Cheers. - danjel  (talk to me) 06:26, 8 July 2011 (UTC)