User talk:Hires an editor/Essay

This is a strong start, but I think it could be better organized. In particular, the paragraph beginning "Wikipedia has also made me better..." starts off in one direction but then goes on a tangent.--ragesoss (talk) 15:16, 5 October 2009 (UTC)
 * Thanks! It does need improving, so I'll work on it, and happily take advice. Of course, you're also welcome to throw something in there, too. Hires an editor (talk) 22:06, 5 October 2009 (UTC)