User talk:Hirokayamasaki

Hello Mr. Hirokaya:

You have done a good job writing the summary of Shinnyo-en. I especially like the recent edits you've made. The writing is clear.

But there are two problems:
 * 1) Wikipedia is supposed to be encyclopedic which means verifiable and non-bias. The current Shinnyo-en article goes against Wikipedia policy.  Please read these pages:  Neutral point of view, Verifiability, and What Wikipedia is not.  But you have done so much good work, it seems a shame to delete it.  It would be best if you were to host the non-neutral material on a separate web site, then include a link to it in the 'External Links' section of the Wikipedia article.
 * 2) The article is very detailed; it's like a Chiryu-gakuin lesson. This detail should not be revealed to the general public.  When the general public Googles "Shinnyo-en", this page appears early in the Google results.  Beginners are not ready to digest this level of detail; it could scare them away.  If you are a true Shinnyo-en follower, please do jogu-bodhi with your lineage parent and/or your office people, and find the appropriate level of detail to publish.

Best regards,

--Danwri 04:51, 25 July 2006 (UTC)

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Your edit to Shinnyo En-The Three Treasures
I've retracted AntiVandalBot's warning. The next time you want to delete your own articles, please follow the procedure at Criteria for speedy deletion and use the  tag. --  Netsnipe  (Talk)  18:31, 10 August 2006 (UTC)