User talk:Hispring

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Your submission at Articles for creation: AloPeyk (September 16)
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Hitro talk 06:31, 16 September 2020 (UTC)


 * thanks for reviewing the draft. As you can see, I tried to edit the draft and remove the Tone of voice in advertising. But you believe that the problem remains. I wonder if you underline to me the exact sentence that you think it needs to fix.Hispring (talk) 14:46, 16 September 2020 (UTC)


 * Hello there, the words like "providing", "service provider", etc. give the sense that the content is trying to outline the working structure of the country, this is not good for an encyclopedic article. The content should be informative not promotive. "", that is suitable for the official website of the company, not for an encyclopedic article. I will suggest you to rewrite the content and keep it precise. Make sure to demonstrate notability per WP:NCORP, specially WP:CORPDEPTH. Regards. Hitro talk 06:57, 17 September 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: AloPeyk (October 22)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Delta fiver was:

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Delta fiver (talk) (UTC) 15:27, 22 October 2020 (UTC)


 * thanks for reviewing the draft! unfortunately, I can't get your mean by "Language used in the article to describe the subject, seems too informal for the Wikipedia".Which word or which sentences has the mentioned problem? I wonder if you give me a favor and show them to me?Hispring (talk) 18:06, 23 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi there, what I meant by the language being informal is that articles have to be well written for example, instead of saying the startup’s CEO, said, it's preferred here to use the CEO mention that or CEO stated that, also another important thing to mention is that, what ever has been quoted or said by someone else, has to be within two beginning and ending quotations. Take a look at articles like Uber Eats, try to identify and mimic the language used there in your article. Good luck. Delta fiver (talk) (UTC) 19:33, 23 October 2020 (UTC)
 * thanks for explaining the issues in detail. I tried to fix them. Can I ask you to take a look at it?Hispring (talk) 11:40, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: AloPeyk (December 2)
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Theroadislong (talk) 10:30, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

thanks for review the article. I took a look at articles like Uber Eats and snapp!, then try to use the used language in my article. If my article bothers from advertisement words, that articles bother from it too. However, they had gotten permission to publish in Wikipedia, Alopeyk was rejected. Isn't it a double standard?Hispring (talk) 12:55, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Please see other stuff exists the existence of other poor quality articles is not an excuse to create another, your draft was declined, not rejected, it can be improved and accepted. Theroadislong (talk) 18:30, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Your concerns are understandable. I have reviewed other articles like Uber and snapp!, and I tried to use the same construction and language used in those articles in mine. Therefore if my article has problems with using advertisement words, then must it also be for Uber and Snapp! articles. I have tried to do my best to publish an article that follows wikipedia policies. I tried my article to be non-advertisement and have a neutral point of view. In the way, I used the advice of another user or the second reviewer said to me, try to identify and mimic the language used Uber Eats in my article. Therefore I need you specifically mention which parts have problems and need to be revised. I hope this is going to be my final revision.Hispring (talk) 10:20, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:AloPeyk has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:AloPeyk. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 18:56, 6 December 2020 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:AloPeyk has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:AloPeyk. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 16:37, 8 December 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: AloPeyk (December 30)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Martin Urbanec was:

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Martin Urbanec (talk) 21:00, 30 December 2020 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:AloPeyk


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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Eternal Shadow  Talk  21:00, 30 June 2021 (UTC)