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IJB043 Peer Review
Noise Pollution Paragraph

-As these are only rough drafts I know sources will be placed within them so I won't comment on that. Perhaps separate paragraph into two smaller ones labelled specific and con-specific for the birds section. For the beginning of the Marine Animals section it would flow better without the first sentence "Noise pollution can affect both terrestrial and marine animals". Overall information is presented neutral and well written.

Light Pollution Paragraph

-Perhaps lead the sentence "However, it is not only insects that are affected by light pollution" with simply saying frogs are also effected by light pollution and then explain why. Remainder of the section is fine and information is again presented neutral and well written.

IJB043 (talk) 22:16, 7 November 2018 (UTC)