User talk:Hjiang2

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Hello, Hjiang2, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Draft:Operational Risk
Hi! I wanted to drop a quick note on your edits. I saw that you're going into a lot of detail about event risk, however keep in mind that when it comes to operational risk you should only be covering this as it applies to operational risk. That means that you'd cover it in a way such as "Event risk impacts operational risk by...". My recommendation here is that since there doesn't seem to be a page on the topic of event risk, you should work on this as an independent article, as there's potentially more need for a separate article on event risk. There's definitely enough sourcing out there to justify this having its own page and as the content you added is really about event risk and not operational risk, you've already got a start with what you've written. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:10, 20 December 2018 (UTC)