User talk:Hlc63/sandbox

Feedback on final assignment
Hello Hlc63,

When editing Wikipedia, the tone of an article has to read more like it is descriptive/informative, and less like offering medical advice. If you would like to move any of your edits to the livespace, please consult [] to practice writing in a different style. I think you have selected a very important topic, and I would recommend finding more textbooks to support the information you would like to provide. Let me know if you have questions! Saguaromelee (talk) 14:37, 10 May 2018 (UTC)