User talk:Hmaldr7304/sandbox

The footnote numbering seems off. They shouldn't all be footnote '1'. Dr. BrickerRbricker (talk) 18:10, 21 November 2018 (UTC)

Pete Weil Peer Review
You have a pretty solid outline for your article, however, footnotes need to be fixed. How many sources do you plan to use to apply new information to this topic and Wikipedia article? Pete Weil (talk) 16:36, 28 November 2018 (UTC) Pete Weil

Ben Collins Peer Reveiw
Im not quite sure about the bullet points. Maybe elaborate more on each point and form some paragraphs, otherwise this seems like a great start Benc1021 (talk) 16:18, 5 December 2018 (UTC)