User talk:HobyHu/sandbox

Peer Review
Hi,

Your work is very lovely. It'd better if you could fix some small grammar mistakes and add more evidence on the part of "recognition." Overall, the structure, information and tone are wonderful.

MEILING WU

Hkim856 (talk) 17:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC) Nicely done. Your article is quite well-source and demonstrates an in-depth coverage on the topic. Just a quick note on the very last paragraph: One of the ways that you can improve this paragraph is to better support the main idea ("Different than idol music in other parts of the world, Korean idol pop basically dominates the genre of Korean popular music, forming a monopoly power as a mainstream business in its domestic market.) You might consider giving statistics if you'd like to put Korean case into a global perspective. Similarly, your final note on the overwhelming presence of idols in SK culture can be a nice way to wrap up the section, but the last comment might need to be justified ("That is probably why in most cases they are the ones responsible for bringing both the bright and dark side of K-pop and its cultural capital system out into international perspective."). If this is a claim from the reference that you cited, then just make it clear that this is not your own interpretation.