User talk:Hoda Sidani

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Hello, Hoda Sidani, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Ihsan El-Kousy (November 29)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Devonian Wombat was:

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Devonian Wombat (talk) 07:30, 29 November 2021 (UTC)

Ihsan El-Kousy
Thank you, Hoda Sidani, for contributing this interesting biography. It could be improved by adding references to all the information you present with at least one reference for each paragraph. Some of the comments seem to be based on your own interpretation of events of the times. Unless you can provide sources to justify them, they should be removed from the article. Please let me know if you need any further assistance with this or any other articles you are working on.--Ipigott (talk) 07:40, 3 December 2021 (UTC)