User talk:Hoffbell

--Tryptofish (talk) 20:16, 18 March 2017 (UTC)

peer review
Hi there, I just finished reading through your addition to the article "March Against Monsanto: Difference between revisions", the section 'The Fox Network and Monsanto'. The section is very well done and provides a compelling, yet neutral, account of the events. Your writing does not sway to much to one side or the other, and you simply present the facts as they occurred. While you provide some good references to back up your statements, some of these listed in the reference list appear to be missing links or incomplete, so I would suggest revising these. Just a few minor grammatical errors or awkward sentence structures, but overall a really solid section. Nice job! Lhalas (talk) 23:23, 3 April 2017 (UTC)