User talk:Hogon4915121/sandbox

This is Diola, practicing a bit with talk page. Hodon4915121Hogon4915121 (talk) 18:45, 16 March 2020 (UTC)

Feedback on your sandbox
Hi here are some things I noticed about your sandbox:
 * Wikipedia articles only used boldface in certain circumstances. Most article do not have any bold font outside the very first sentence where the article title is in bold.
 * The same goes for underlining. Underlining is almost never used in Wikipedia.
 * You have several paragraphs without citations. You'll want to add citations to show that these aren't your original thoughts, but ideas that have been published in reliable sources.
 * I think your work could benefit by adding more links to other Wikipedia articles. You can add links by going into edit mode, highlighting a word or term with your mouse, and clicking the icon of the chain links on the top toolbar. Ask yourself, what article might a reader want to learn more about while reading this article? I usually try to have at least one link per paragraph.

Other than that, the content in your sandbox is conforming to the Wikipedia style guidelines! Let me know if you have any questions. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:55, 27 March 2020 (UTC)

Review Received and Highly Appreciated
Dear Ms. Webb: Thank you very much for reviewing my sandboxes. I understood the suggestions and I will address them accordingly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hogon4915121 (talk • contribs) 14:21, 30 March 2020 (UTC)