User talk:Holden Crawfield/sandbox

Comments on sandbox Good coverage of information, I would suggest bringing your last two sentences together for flow since they both cover findings of the site. Ryanseedorf (talk) 18:07, 21 March 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review 1
I like that you often linked to other articles within your edit. Being able to view lots of other information really helps with the overall understanding of the article. That being said I think it may be useful to link to something related to "Indo-Roman" as I didn't really know what that referred to. Also, it looks like your first 2 sources are the same. I'm not sure if they're supposed to be different sources or if that was just an editing mistake but just looking at them they appear to be the same. Roccoisagoodboy (talk) 18:25, 22 March 2018 (UTC)