User talk:Hollyc1026

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-- 23:23, Monday, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

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-- 23:25, Monday, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

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-- 23:25, Monday, September 28, 2015 (UTC)

Article improvements-TEACHH Program
-The first sentence that introduces the topic is not cited. Here is an article that could be linked to cite the first sentence: http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0272735813000937 -In the overview in the "strategies" section there should be a hyperlink to the "applied behavioral analysis page" wikipedia page when it is mentioned in this section.Hollyc1026 (talk) 03:06, 14 October 2015 (UTC) -In this section there is a sentence without citation "working from the premise that people with autism are predominantly visual learners, intervention strategies are based around physical and visual structures, schedules, work systems, and task organization."Hollyc1026 (talk) 03:06, 14 October 2015 (UTC) -Regarding the "international recognition" section, article says development has been slower elsewhere; "slower" should be quantified and cited.Hollyc1026 (talk) 03:06, 14 October 2015 (UTC) -Overall, there appears to be more emphasis on effectiveness of treatment and less on the criticism. This showed some bias in favor of the treatment. A more objective view that goes into more detail of criticisms and any cases where the treatment was unsuccessful would be beneficial for people who are deciding if the TEACHH program could be a potential treatment for their child.Hollyc1026 (talk) 03:06, 14 October 2015 (UTC)

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