User talk:Hollykorn

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Hello, Hollykorn, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Katie's edits for Holly
Hi Holly!

I think you did a really great job with your article. I really appreciated that you were able to find information to flesh out multiple sections of the page as well as make another one yourself. I think you have a lot of really good information, and you did a good job of sticking to a more factual writing style instead of analysis or persuasion. Really excellent job with citations. Altogether just a really well-done article. I'm really trying to think of critiques to give, but it's difficult to find any. I will say it does sound a little but like you're just listing facts sometimes instead of transitioning between things, but that's more of something to watch out for in your paper.

Hope that was kind of helpful! Katie Enidwexler (talk) 21:41, 16 November 2017 (UTC)