User talk:Hollyroad

Welcome and introduction
Hi, Hollyroad. This is NOT some automated message...it's from a real person by golly! And this real person (that would be me), wants to say welcome to Wikipedia! I'm glad you've made an account! Thanks for joining; you're on your way to making some great contributions.

Because I've noticed you've just joined, I wanted to give you a few tips to get you started. If you have any questions, please talk to us. Any questions are fine, nothing is too silly (we've heard them all). Now, the tips below - hop on them - they should help you begin editing. Best of luck! JoeSmack Talk 18:46, 14 October 2009 (UTC)

P.S. If you just feel like poking around, Help is a good place to start. :)

Orphaned non-free image File:DestinySolutions.jpg
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Review
Ok I gave the article a once over. The section on the scholarship needs to be re-written (I have put it in comments for now) as it's copied from a press release. I would suggest naming two or three "high profile" clients, or linking to the client list or both. We try to avoid phrase like "many high profile clients" in favour of things like "thirty-two US universities including five Ivy League institutions." When linking you don't need to put the item twice, the pipe is only needed if you are linking to something different from the displayed words. Apart from that I simplified a few sentences, removed couple of "peacock terms" and made some minor tweaks. Rich Farmbrough, 18:35, 22 December 2009 (UTC).

FYI conflict of interest guideline
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