User talk:Hollystyles16

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Hello, Hollystyles16, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review Article Evaluation
This article on "The Aquaculture Stewardship Council" is very well written and laid out. There are many headings dividing the different aspects of the topics down into an easy reading manner. The article begins with a topic sentence introducing what exactly The Aquaculture Stewardship Council that gives the reader a brief summary of the definition which is a nice way to begin a wikipedia article. The article is properly coded in the highlighting of certain words to bring to other wikipedia pages and there are also sub-headings such as "See Also", "Notes & References" and "External Links" with highlighted topics to bring to other wikipedia pages with related topics which was a smart addition to the article. The article also has proper sentence flow that has fluidity and correct grammar throughout that creates professionalism for the reader. There were no biases or persuasiveness used as it remained factual and informative to the facts of the research. However, there is also room for more research and content to be added to help elaborate more on the topic that could be added to the final draft. Overall, excellent work.

Hollystyles16 (talk) 23:48, 3 March 2018 (UTC)