User talk:Holowiki

Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Richard B Hollis


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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. C679 12:15, 10 December 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Richard B Hollis (March 1)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Liance was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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-Liancetalk/contribs 18:10, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Your request for AfC assistance
Hi, I noticed your request for assistance on the draft you submitted to Articles for Creation. Although the draft itself is well written, links in the article's content are discouraged (in this case, the links about the companies e.g. IMED corporation, Instromedix), and may be better suited as references or in an external links section at the bottom of the article. Thank you, and if you have any more questions feel free to ask on my talk page. -Liancetalk/contribs 18:46, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Response
Hello. I noticed that, at the bottom, there are "additional references", which should be either removed or integrated into the article. Also, feel free to submit your draft for review anytime, it's no pressure to get it 100% perfect each time and different reviewers can help give different opinions on what needs fixing. Thank you! -Liancetalk/contribs 22:56, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Richard B Hollis (March 7)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

The comment they left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Richard B Hollis and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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LaMona (talk) 22:42, 7 March 2016 (UTC)

Your request for AfC assistance
First and foremost, if you have been asked to create the article then it may have been a potential conflict of interest, and you must disclose your relation to the subject, preferable on your userpage. If you have been paid to edit, which is highly discouraged, please also disclose this. As stated by the reviewer who looked at your article, much of the images are not needed and there are uncessary details (e.g. childhood sports). Thanks -Liancetalk/contribs 00:52, 8 March 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Richard B Hollis (March 9)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Richard B Hollis and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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 Onel 5969  TT me 13:08, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Richard B Hollis has been accepted
 Richard B Hollis, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. However, do not reinsert the material I removed--it was the only way to make an acceptable article out of it. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  DGG ( talk ) 23:05, 25 March 2016 (UTC)
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