User talk:Holtzhausen

Your submission at Articles for creation: Johannes P. Louw has been accepted
 Johannes P. Louw, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia!  DGG ( talk ) 20:22, 13 September 2014 (UTC)
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Advice
While accepting it, I also removed several sections that were either uncited, overpersonal, or overdetailed. Please do not restore them. I'd advise you to try to make the article still more compact, as there remains some duplication that needs to be removed.  DGG ( talk ) 21:13, 13 September 2014 (UTC)