User talk:Hon102awu12/sandbox

Peer Review Overall I think the article is very informative and structured. One thing I think could use some touching up is the Aftermath chapter at the end. The writing seems a bit too linear for an encyclopedia article. Despite this, I think it is still very informative, and has good historical basis and critical analysis of the impact behind the July Days. Lastly, there are a lot of Steinberg references, so perhaps try to find a few more sources (2 or 3) to kind of balance out the amount of Steinberg added into the article. Sbrinkman50 (talk) 21:21, 27 October 2017 (UTC)Spencer Brinkman