User talk:Hoopster723

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I see that your only edits have been to that article. If you have an obvious conflict of interest, you must declare it, please don't write about yourself, your friends, colleagues or relatives and read the guidance below:


 * When you write about a person, you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.


 * Some of the text is unreferenced and, more worryingly, the supposed refs don't always appear to confirm what is claimed. I only checked three, but one was dead, and the refs for From 2013 to 2022, McMahon was the Vice President of Impact Investment at KBI Biopharma and McMahon is also the creator of Anddit, a technology that connects people to support resources don't mention him at all.


 * You must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.


 * Such as McMahon is also the creator of Anddit, a technology that connects people to support resources... The incubator was part of several major branding deals that catalyzed start-up firms... that helps hospitalized children feel better and heal faster by improving their patient environments... accelerates the development of innovative discoveries into life-changing biological products and expands global access of medicines to patients in need. all unverifiable, and unsourced or sourced to his companies


 * There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.


 * Especially spamlinks to his company


 * You must not copy text from elsewhere. Copyrighted text is not allowed in Wikipedia, as outlined in this policy. That applies even to pages created by you or your organisation, unless they state clearly and explicitly that the text is public domain. We require that text posted here can be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial; text is considered to be copyright unless explicitly stated otherwise. There are ways to donate copyrighted text to Wikipedia, as described here; please note that simply asserting on the talk page that you are the owner of the copyright, or you have permission to use the text, isn't sufficient.

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. If you are writing about yourself, or someone you know as a friend, colleague, client, employer or relative, you have a conflict of interest, and you must disclose the nature of that COI.

Jimfbleak - talk to me? 09:38, 4 November 2023 (UTC)