User talk:Hopeprost

Welcome!
Hello, Hopeprost, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:17, 10 September 2016 (UTC)

Your article
Hi Hopeprost. Nice work on your draft. However, it isn't ready to go "live" yet, so I moved it back to User:Hopeprost/sandbox. Please review the sections on article layout in the Editing Wikipedia brochure (pages 7-9) and make the necessary changes to bring it into line with these requirements. For example, you need to create a lead section that summarizes all the main points of the article. Don't phrase sections as questions (encyclopedia articles don't do that). Make sure that you create a "References" section and remove the student sandbox template. Once you have done that, go over the checklist on page 15 of the handout and make sure that it meets these requirements. (If you reply to this message here, please include  in your response, to ensure that I see your reply.) Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:39, 31 October 2016 (UTC)