User talk:Hopewell Pinstripe

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Hello, Hopewell Pinstripe, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Sarah's Peer Review
Strengths: I think the direction that you're taking the article in is informational, interesting, and important. You also do a good job of balancing different perspectives (i.e. Elster versus Friedman versus Appiah). Overall it looks great!

Things to add: You need to make citations! Also I think the page itself would benefit from a little bit of an introduction about the importance this might have to social science. Why is prediction important? I think you could also make the language a little less philosophical and a little less jargon-y so that anyone who was reading it could ideally understand it! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alshalash1 (talk • contribs) 20:10, 6 March 2019 (UTC)