User talk:Hotstart54

Welcome to Wikipedia
Hello, Hotstart,

It appears that you are new to Wikipedia. I wanted to thank you for the interest you have shown in Arthur Keen's biography. I want to help you get off to a good start here in Wikipedia.

I am moving your remarks about the error in his death date around onto the Discussion page for this article, where such information customarily belongs. Also, I intend to add a citation to justify the source of your information. Although other reputable sources give 12 September as his death date, I agree with you that his service records are more reliable.

I am also re-linking his Military Cross award to the article on this medal. I will leave the linkage for the Humane Society Medal for Bravery for later, when you have supplied details. The source of your information concerning this award will be useful in adding a citation for it. If you are not yet comfortable with building a citation, please leave the information on the Discussion page.

Please do not be offended or defensive about my editing. It's all part of the process of constant improvement of articles, to make Wikipedia a more reliable text.

Once again, welcome aboard. Thank you for your contribution.

Georgejdorner (talk) 21:19, 29 December 2011 (UTC)