User talk:Houdabe/sandbox

Alex Peer Review
You should add a lead so that readers know what your article is about! I think you can pull out parts of your “Overview” section into a lead (or even turn the entire section into your lead)

“It symbolizes the rapid development of Korea's cultural industries and its exports of cultural products in Asia since late 1990s, and in the world lates of 2000s presenting itself as a major Asian presence on the media globe.” I would reword the “in the world hates of 2000s” part to make it more clear

“Hallyu2.0 which started in late 2000s, from 2008 to the present, went beyond the goals of Hallyu1.0 to include the convergence of creative content and digital technologies which led to the expansion of the cultural markets for Korea—from Asia to America (North and South), Western Europe and even the Arab countries [1].” change to “Hallyu2.0 which started in late 2000s, from 2008 to the present, went beyond the goals of Hallyu1.0 to include the convergence of creative content and digital technologies which led to the expansion of the cultural markets for Korea- from Asia to America (North and South), Western Europe and even the Arab countries [1].”

“The MENA region is an abbreviation which refers to the countries in the Middle Eastern and North African territories. This acronym is usually used in American academia. This region expands from Morocco ( North Africa) to Iran (Western Asia) including 36 different countries, with their unique combinations of various ethnicities (Arab, Berber, Persian..), political systems, religions, customs, and dialects if not sometimes different languages.” change to “The MENA region is an abbreviation which refers to the countries in the Middle Eastern and North African territories. This acronym is usually used in American academia. This region spans from Morocco (North Africa) to Iran (Western Asia) including 36 different countries, with their unique combinations of various ethnicities (Arab, Berber, Persian), political systems, religions, customs, and dialects if not sometimes different languages.” Also, I would try to find a citation to back up “This acronym is usually used in American academia”

I think it would be better to be more specific about the 1000 years of shared cultural history between Korea and MENA. I would add a citation and give some concrete examples.

What is the Korean-Arab society?

“However, this did not stop the Korean industries from exporting more Korean Dramas to the Arab world in the following years such as “The Heirs” ( الورثة).” to “However, this did not stop the Korean industries from exporting more Korean dramas to the Arab world in the following years such as “The Heirs” ( الورثة).

“MENA region-and its continuous growth- originates from the content of these dramas.As” to “MENA region—and its continuous growth—originates from the content of these dramas. As”

“theEgyptian communication satellites” to “the Egyptian communication satellites”

“fans club” and “fans base” to “fan club” and “fan base”

“Kimchi” to “kimchi”

Great job! Very informative article!