User talk:Howerzym/sandbox

I made minor changes to your article draft. I changed some of your wording in your paragraphs, for instance you had at times "caring" plan instead of "care" plan. Also at times you used phrases that had "us" in it which directed the paper back to you and it needed to be more generalized to the public. So I took that our for you. Other than that, I loved you article. It was very well written and I feel like if someone was reading it and wanted to know how to construct a nursing care plan this would be a good tool for them to use. Rodeh777 (talk) 21:36, 17 November 2017 (UTC)