User talk:Hpark1/sandbox

Pseudosenility page should be edited to include more background information on the topic and its definition in lay terms. More statistics should also be added on how the general population is affected. These changes, such as the statistics may make the page more confusing to look at in a quick glance, and can also change views on how readers are concerned on the importance of the topic depending on what percentage of the population is affected. Expanding on the background information will help readers understand the topic generally before going more deeply into the topic. Hpark1 (talk) 01:53, 29 July 2020 (UTC)Hpark1