User talk:Hpascarella/sandbox

I first wan to start out by saying good job on your entry. Everything to my best knowledge is relevant to your topic. Your article is neutral and there doesn't seem to be any claims or frames that appear to a certain position. The viewpoints that are in your article i would say are not overrepresented and not underrepresented. They are in the middle. You added a lot of good detail to your work. All of your citations work as well so thats a god thing. One thing you could work on is not every fact is supported with a reliable reference. The last thing is all of your information seems to be up to date. So overall good job.

BryantTalbot7 (talk) 22:25, 4 December 2020 (UTC)