User talk:Hprmartins/projectdraft

Review by Breanalloyd
I am very interested to see what your page will be like once you have been able to provide more body, depth, and data to the wiki page. It appears from your project draft page so far that your Wiki Page for your project was a pure stub with pretty much no pre-existing information. My page was similarly like this also, which in a way makes it both easier as well as a bit more tricky to edit. Since you're providing the pure basis for which your wiki page will stand on for others to see and use as a source themselves. The tricky part is that maybe the reason it has so little on its wiki page is because finding the sources for the information on the topic is difficult or scarce. I will keep watch on your project draft page of this wiki project so as to follow your additions and changes and provide you with better, updated reviews and recommendations. As of right now I would say great topic choice, keep digging hard for the sources and information and remember to provide thorough but clear background/introductory information for the wiki readers. A few tips to keep in mind as a reminder: remember to try and keep your information and content to a fourth grade reading level so as to make it so almost all can read it and understand your topic. Also try to remain as neutral in content and information presentation as you can; I know this can be extremely difficult especially since you're gaining information from sources that may not be neutral within itself and thus making this information that may be foreign to you neutral may be tough. Overall great job so far! Keep chugging along on this girl and I can't wait to check back in and see what you get contributed! If you need any assistance feel free to reach out to me :)

Review #2- Breana Lloyd
Great job adding to the wiki project page! I love all the edits and additions that you have been able to add. Overall great start! You have done a pretty good job of neutrality and good sourcing. Keep up the great work! Just some notes to remember and keep in mind: keep your content neutral, avoid persuasive wording, and redundancy. Overall you have pretty decent sources but if you can dig deep into the articles and find some really strong content thats been peer-reviewed if you can, I know how insanely hard it can be but a few good sources will really hold this page together! Great start, if you have any questions please feel to reach out to me. -BL