User talk:Hr brain

Your submission at Articles for creation: HiFives (September 28)
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KartikeyaS (talk) 17:38, 28 September 2020 (UTC)

Dear KartikeyaS343

I have edited the article and resubmitted. Please let me know how this looks and suggest if any changes are required. Thanks.