User talk:Hsim2

Welcome!
Hello, Hsim2, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hello! Just completed the peer review of your article. Best, Emma

Just wanted to follow up, in looking for the peer review of my own article, I noticed that what I have written it not easy to find! (It's under my contributions). So I thought I would quickly summarize. I think you did a really nice job with this article. Reorganizing it made a world of difference. It flows much better now and is much more coherent. The information that you added was very good, particularly when it clarified points that I had felt were missing in the original article (like Brödel's first encounter with medical illustration). The original article already had a lot of information, so I was impressed with what you were able to add. My one suggestion to strengthen your article would be to spruce up some of the writing in the original article. From the parts you added, I think your writing style is superior to the original author's. You might be able to elevate the tone of the article simply by incorporating more of your writing into it. Nice job! Ewhiteh6 (talk) 15:05, 1 April 2020 (UTC)