User talk:Hsummermichelle/Sandbox

= Review =

Great start! Lots of good content that you need to now distill in an encyclopedic tone. I removed the overly detailed addresses, links, and pricing; I also added a bunch of templates.


 * I would simply date the annual collections instead of speaking of "the next collection."
 * Link to related articles (e.g., Shopbop)
 * Remove editorializing tone
 * Remove images from Wikipedia as you do not have permission; then remove them from your article.
 * The sections on Jennifer are editorializing and informal.
 * Don't write "currently," as your text may persist for years. Use specific dates.

I look forward to helping you advance this article further!

- Reagle (talk) 14:06, 6 March 2019 (UTC)