User talk:Huang sun choi

Language Policy in Education - Indonesia
I chose the topic "Language policy in Education" for Indonesia in Asia because it concerns me. I come from that country and feel that the issue of language, especially postcolonial, is an exciting topic. In addition, I am a local language user from more than hundreds of languages ​​in Indonesia. By discussing this topic, I hope there are things I can make to make people know about the history behind Language Policy in Education in Indonesia.

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Knowing that Indonesia has a lot of diversity, one of it is language, makes this topic interesting for me. After reading the article, here are some review that I would like to share:

The introduction part has described the background of language in Indonesia clearly but has not shown the summary of the whole article which describes what you will write. It would be better if you could add more information about the whole article in the introduction part.

The overall article are easy to understand. The structure including heading and subheadings are separated in a good way that helps the reader to understand the flow of the article. It is also written in short sentences and using active tenses so it is easier to understand. The picture showing maps of local languages in Indonesia also escalates the readers’ understanding about the language diversity in Indonesia. To develop the article, I think it would be nice if you could explain more about the subheadings witten in the article and add some bridging in between each subheadings to help the readers’ reading flow.

The article’s statements are also provided with diverse and high quality references including references from country context: Indonesia making this article trustworthy. Other good things about this article is that this article also provides a curated wikilinks that helps me as a reader to seek further reading.

Peer Review: The topic of this article is very interesting. The context of the topic is well explained using many sources helping to give an understanding of language policy in Indonesia in the: past, present and future. The use of the image is useful in seeing the different languages in the region. To improve maybe use more neutral language throughout the article.

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Peer Assesment
Knowing that Indonesia has a lot of diversity, one of it is language, makes this topic interesting for me. After reading the article, here are some review that I would like to share:

The introduction part has described the background of language in Indonesia clearly but has not shown the summary of the whole article which describes what you will write. It would be better if you could add more information about the whole article in the introduction part.

The overall article are easy to understand. The structure including heading and subheadings are separated in a good way that helps the reader to understand the flow of the article. It is also written in short sentences and using active tenses so it is easier to understand. The picture showing maps of local languages in Indonesia also escalates the readers’ understanding about the language diversity in Indonesia. To develop the article, I think it would be nice if you could explain more about the subheadings witten in the article and add some bridging in between each subheadings to help the readers’ reading flow.

The article’s statements are also provided with diverse and high quality references including references from country context: Indonesia making this article trustworthy. Other good things about this article is that this article also provides a curated wikilinks that helps me as a reader to seek further reading. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sonianaibaho (talk • contribs) 19:16, 3 December 2021 (UTC)

Feedback to Peer Reviews
Thanks for the comments. In the introduction to Wikipedia, I will add a summary of the article to make it easier for readers to read this article. In terms of connecting between one heading and another, I will also add it to help readers know the flow of the discussion. I think all the comments help me improve this article's quality. :) — Preceding unsigned comment added by 139.184.223.126 (talk) 06:25, 6 December 2021 (UTC)