User talk:Hugh Beresford1997/Evaluate an Article

This is an excellent evaluation, Hugh! I appreciate the care with which you address each of the categories for evaluation suggested by Wikipedia. I know that you're interested in editing this page, and given the issues that you've identified with it, I am willing to accept you editing it. The main challenge is that you simply won't have a clear sense of the big picture of music in Syria. It's true that you only need to add missing information (i.e., you don't necessarily need to have a good overall sense of music in Syria), but I think you will find it easier to start with some aspect of Syrian music, write about it in some depth, and then summarize it on the Music in Syria page. --CBFraoch (talk) 17:09, 21 October 2021 (UTC)