User talk:Huginnscientia/Turtle brain evolution/Salinas413 Peer Review

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Thank you for you comments and review! I really appreciate how you took the time to look into it in details. Your suggestions are great. I will apply all the grammatical/spelling corrections - thank you for pointing those out. I do agree that some sentence are a bit too long. I will work on those as well. I will also expand the information about lateral and dorsal cortices.

I was unsure about this comment "Also, I trust that this information is probably common knowledge to you (a turtle expert!!) but I would suggest adding a reference for that information for all of us lay people." Do you mean reference to the parts of the brain with regard to function?

The comment over the neocortex sentence, you understood it correctly. But I will work on the working.

Huginnscientia (talk) 03:44, 3 November 2022 (UTC)