User talk:HuizhiFu98/sandbox

Well thought out and written wikipedia article, formatted very well and clearly has a lot of effort into it. However citations may be done better, with more sources and data from different sources, not just constantly reusing the same few sources. Also you should cite more often for how much you have written. Overall, really good though Yuangd (talk) 19:29, 28 October 2018 (UTC)yuangd