User talk:Hunterft99/sandbox

Hey! I agree with all of your edits, I just have a couple notes: 1. When you’re adding to the part about squids being their primary source of food, you say you want to add why they are such a significant part of their diet; however, the edit you added only really supports the fact that is already stated, that strip is a predominant food source. If you can find a source that explains more why this is – maybe shrimp are abundant in the frilled shark’s habitat, or they have a specialized adaptation to eat shrimp – that would help! 2. Very small edit, but you accidentally said “there” instead of “their” in the third sentence in bold, that starts with “frilled sharks are able...” Cosettepatterson (talk) 03:37, 25 October 2020 (UTC)