User talk:Hurwith2

Your submission at Articles for creation: DealerRater (July 16)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by MJL were:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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&#8211; MJL &thinsp;‐Talk‐☖ 00:44, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Hurwith2, and welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, one or more of the pages you created, such as Draft:DealerRater, may not conform to some of Wikipedia's guidelines, and may not be retained.

There's a page about creating articles you may want to read called Your first article. If you are stuck, and looking for help, please come to the Teahouse, where experienced Wikipedians can answer any queries you have! Or, you can just type help me on this page, followed by your question, and someone will show up shortly to answer your questions. Here are a few other good links for newcomers: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically produce your name and the date. If you have any questions, check out Questions or ask me on my talk page. Again, welcome! &#8211; MJL &thinsp;‐Talk‐☖ 00:45, 16 July 2019 (UTC)
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Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:DealerRater


A tag has been placed on Draft:DealerRater, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, group, product, service, person, or point of view and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and FAQ/Organizations for more information.

If you think this page should not be deleted for this reason, you may contest the nomination by visiting the page and clicking the button labelled "Contest this speedy deletion". This will give you the opportunity to explain why you believe the page should not be deleted. However, be aware that once a page is tagged for speedy deletion, it may be deleted without delay. Please do not remove the speedy deletion tag from the page yourself, but do not hesitate to add information in line with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines. If the page is deleted, and you wish to retrieve the deleted material for future reference or improvement, then please contact the. creffett (talk) 01:53, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Deb. I wanted to let you know that one or more of your recent contributions have been undone because they appeared to be promotional. Advertising and using Wikipedia as a "soapbox" are against Wikipedia policy and not permitted; Wikipedia articles should be written objectively, using independent sources, and from a neutral perspective. Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thank you. Hello, Hurwith2. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a COI may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the COI guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:


 * avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, company, organization or competitors;
 * propose changes on the talk pages of affected articles (you can use the request edit template);
 * disclose your COI when discussing affected articles (see WP:DISCLOSE);
 * avoid linking to your organization's website in other articles (see WP:SPAM);
 * do your best to comply with Wikipedia's content policies.

In addition, you must disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation (see WP:PAID).

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you.Deb (talk) 08:17, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Drafting new articles
Hi. One tip I'd give you is to be careful with your sources and not use any that are either written by or sponsored by the subject of the article. My second suggestion is that you begin by editing existing articles and wait until you've got your eye in before trying to create brand-new ones. Deb (talk) 15:23, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Thank you Deb. I am happy to remove sources that are connected to the company. After editing other pages, do you think I can try to republish? Also, I found another company Wiki page that I thought was a good template - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/HomeAdvisor. They mentioned similar stats and achievements. Was this a good comp to use? Deb

, the other reviewer did not think the page warranted a deletion. "@Hurwith2: Huh, I am rather surprised to see Deb deleted it. I certainly didn't think it was that bad (I believe I said it was worth merging with another article), but since I am not an admin I no longer have access to the article... –MJL ‐Talk‐☖ 15:47, 16 July 2019 (UTC)"
 * Hurwith2, before you continue, would you mind playing the Wikipedia Adventure for me? It helps new users get used to editing Wikipedia. Cheers, &#8211; MJL &thinsp;‐Talk‐☖ 17:47, 16 July 2019 (UTC)


 * HomeAdvisor isn't a good example, in its present state, and I'll be looking at it more closely. (You might also have a look at Arguments_to_avoid_in_deletion_discussions I think MJL just forgot what he'd said in his review. See what I've written on his talk page. Deb (talk) 17:48, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Welcome to The Wikipedia Adventure!

 * Hi Hurwith2! We're so happy you wanted to play to learn, as a friendly and fun way to get into our community and mission.  I think these links might be helpful to you as you get started.
 * The Wikipedia Adventure Start Page
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-- 19:36, Tuesday, July 16, 2019 (UTC)

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Happy editing! &#8211; MJL &thinsp;‐Talk‐☖ 21:29, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:DealerRater has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:DealerRater. Thanks! &#8211; MJL &thinsp;‐Talk‐☖ 21:55, 16 July 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: DealerRater (November 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Curb Safe Charmer was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:DealerRater and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:DealerRater, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "db-self" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
 * If you do not make any further changes to your draft, in 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
 * If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:WikiProject_Articles_for_creation/Help_desk&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:DealerRater Articles for creation help desk], on the [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:Curb_Safe_Charmer&action=edit&section=new&nosummary=1&preload=Template:Afc_decline/HD_preload&preloadparams%5B%5D=Draft:DealerRater reviewer's talk page] or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Curb Safe Charmer (talk) 09:18, 18 November 2019 (UTC)

Draft:DealerRater concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:DealerRater, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:27, 19 April 2020 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:DealerRater


Hello, Hurwith2. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "DealerRater".

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia!  Squeeps10 Talk to meMy edits 19:02, 18 May 2020 (UTC)