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Neutrality - Naman
South Africa Project

"This would help spur the agricultural production in South Africa and bolster the fiber and Cashmere wool industry. Altai Mountain goats have lower quality cashmere than indigenous South African goats and a higher live weight" 1. How are you certain it would bolster the fiber and cashmere wool industry?

2. Any references to prove that altai mountain goats have lower quality cashmere or a higher live weight?

Huskypedia (talk) 17:15, 2 November 2018 (UTC)

Introductory Sentence
States article topic concisely and accurately in single sentence.

Summary
Summarizes most major points, but misses one or more important aspects. What type of local goat is bred with the Don goat? You mention how the goat is now bred to maintain a population later in your article. That feels really important! The South African project seems to be extremely essential to the goats story and their reproduction.

Context
All information included is also present in the body of the article.

General Review
Are you planning on including all of the scientific classification information? What about phylogenetic relationships? Are you going to look at care and and diet? What goes into the wool production that makes the goat so essential to breed? There are few instances of the language being biased.

Missing Materials- Bolu Ojuko
The article's summary at the beginning is missing a brief description of the animal's appearance. The rest of the article lacks information on taxonomy group, reactions to humans, predators, specific diet, herding behaviors, and gestation information. This data is prevalent in other animal articles that have achieved good article status. There is a mention of location but information such as vegetation in the area is not in the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by DatGuyyy (talk • contribs) 18:16, 7 November 2018 (UTC)