User talk:Huyshe2022

Your submission at Articles for creation: Wentworth Huyshe (February 17)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MicrobiologyMarcus was:

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microbiology Marcus (petri dish·growths) 13:35, 17 February 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Wentworth Huyshe (February 18)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Wentworth Huyshe and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 12:51, 18 February 2024 (UTC)

Managing a conflict of interest
Hello, Huyshe2022. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on Wikipedia, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for article subjects for more information. We ask that you:


 * avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization, clients, or competitors;
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 * disclose your conflict of interest when discussing affected articles (see );
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In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. microbiology Marcus [petri dish·growths] 15:48, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

Draft:Wentworth Huyshe
Hi Huyshe2022, I'm responding to the message you left on my talk page here so as to address a number of issues with the aforementioned draft. Firstly, I've left a template message above regarding a potential WP:Conflict of interest you may have that will affect how you should write about subjects on the project. Please read through the relevant policies linked above and be sure to declare any COIs you may have on your user page.

Secondly, your draft suffers from a lot of problems addressed at WP:What Wikipedia is not, our policy about things that should not have their own articles, or be in articles. The draft presently has long lists of nothing but family lineages, sometimes uncited. This should either be trimmed and placed in paragraph format so as to conform to policy or be removed if not notable. These large portions of the draft which are genealogical entries are contrary to the section which says Family histories should be presented only where appropriate to support the reader's understanding of a notable topic.

This brings me to another large hurdle the draft will have to overcome: Notability. Specifically, the subject will have to meet our WP:General notability guidelines to have a page on the project. Specifically, the subject will need to demonstrate significant coverage in sources that are WP:Reliable and secondary, WP:Independent of the subject.

Finally, I've begun some general cleanup on the article to assist in its drafting, but the article suffers from large WP:Verifiability issues. While understanding that some sources may be WP:Offline, these sources need to be properly referenced to allow verification. See WP:REFB for more help on referencing.

You've mentioned on my talk page that the subject was an active member of the Arts & Crafts movement in Chipping Campden in the early 20th century and I've placed that in the lead of the article, but that should be verified in the body of the article using citations. See our guidance of what should be in the lead at MOS:LEAD and note that the WP:LEADFOLLOWSBODY.

Thanks, microbiology Marcus [petri dish·growths] 16:14, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Wentworth Huyshe (April 10)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by MicrobiologyMarcus were:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.


 * If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Wentworth Huyshe and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
 * If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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microbiology Marcus [petri dish·growths] 19:57, 10 April 2024 (UTC)