User talk:Hwubb/Tabby cat/Gemjk19 Peer Review

It looks like from what I can tell you added the bold portion of the article sentences. I think the sentences read nicely, are in good order, and are easy to understand. Also good source. However the statement "the coat of a cat is very important" sounds a bit out of place or opinion-like. Perhaps you only need to word it differently or add to it like "the coat of a cat can be important" or "to some people, the coat of a cat can be important". Other than that, looks great so far.Gemjk19 (talk) 00:52, 23 September 2021 (UTC)