User talk:HyeyoungKimuw/Yeongsanjae

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

My general take right now is that you're making very good progress on this article, so please keep working. I particularly appreciate your usage of good quality sources in this revision! Be sure to incorporate feedback from the peer review. You might find it helpful to apply the peer review guide to your own article as you think about where to go next. You also might find it useful to run your article through a grammar checking program to streamline the text and eliminate errors.

Kaylea Champion (talk) 07:03, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hi I peer reviewed your article and made some grammar changes. I feel like all the information you added are important content for the topic, and you can consider adding more. Maybe expanding the history part or like the process of the ceremony. Great job and look forward to seeing your final draft :)

Megan Wang

Go Live Approval
Hi

You have approval to go live with this article. Great work!

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Code mode, not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Note on article talk page.
 * 6) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 7) Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
 * 8) Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:53, 10 February 2022 (UTC)