User talk:Hylem

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Context
Hello.

You started an article with a sentence that says something like this:
 * A fusion frame of a vector space is a natural extension of a frame.

That fails to tell the lay reader that mathematics is what this is about. "Fusion" can involve mixing different kinds of tea; a "frame" is what you hang a picture in; a vector is an infectious-disease-carrying organism; "natural" means it grows in forests rather than being synthesized in laboratories. I changed it so that it says:
 * In mathematics, a fusion frame of a vector space is a natural extension of a frame.

If an article is titled "homology (mathematics)" and another is titled "homology (biology)", then there's no need for such a context-setting phrase. One can also say "In geometry,..." or "In algebra,..." or "In number theory,..." and expect the lay reader to understand; likewise certain words in an ordinary non-disambiguating title may be understood by the lay reader. And of course "In category theory,..." or the like cannot reasonably be expected to be understood in that way. Michael Hardy (talk) 03:06, 3 March 2013 (UTC)