User talk:Hyungrag/Chinese influences on Islamic pottery

Awesome Job! I like your phrasing and the consistency throughout the page. The outline/organization was clear. some minor things to be aware of is making sentences shorter and adding transitions between the same idea. Greater clarity can be achieved if the sentences are broken down. Overall, to balance out the piece if you have any more information on the the specific consumers of Chinese art within the Islamic world - it could create more depth. Also I see that your sources are veritable, great start. --Saniahh (talk) 05:15, 23 November 2020 (UTC)Saniahh