User talk:IANSEDDON

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Hello, IANSEDDON, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome! Struway2 (talk) 09:49, 9 March 2012 (UTC)
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Peter Withe
Hello, and thank you for trying to keep the article Peter Withe up to date. You may not be aware that information in Wikipedia articles, particularly in biographies of living people, should be taken from reliable published sources and referenced to those sources. Several of the playing and managerial achievements you added are already present in the article. If you have published sources for those items not already present, please feel free to include them in the prose, together with a link to your published source(s).

But please understand that this is an encyclopedia, and Wikipedia pages should take the form of an encyclopedia article. Your changes made the article read like a CV, and the final paragraph, where you suggest Mr Withe is looking for employment, is completely unacceptable: Wikipedia is not a jobsearch site. You may also find the guideline on conflict of interest relevant. best wishes, Struway2 (talk) 09:49, 9 March 2012 (UTC)