User talk:ILBO7water/Jung Kang-ja/Af4718 Peer Review

Peer Review
Hey, what you provided was informative, but I felt like you could provide more key information, such as the city/ village that the artist was born in (in the Lead) and more on the Korean avante-garde scene and the Fourth Group. Af4718 16:40, 10 April 2023 (UTC)


 * I added more suggestions: include hyperlinks for more information on Hongik University, Fourth Group, Shinjeon Group and Young Artist's Union. I am wondering whether the Lead and Biography are the only sections you are working on? For more information, look at the peer review Af4718 20:37, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your review. I have not found in any of the sources I've come across her place of birth, unfortunately. I agree it would add to the article. I also agree about adding more information about the avant garde scene and the collectives she was involved with. I've already added some hyperlinks. ILBO7water (talk) 02:14, 25 April 2023 (UTC)