User talk:ILoveMath1989/sandbox1

Feedback from Elysia
Hi, just a few things:
 * For the title of the section "Education and Career," career should be lowercase per MOS:SECTIONCAPS
 * A few of your references are before your punctuation; they should be after per MOS:REFPUNCT. This is really easy to fix in visual editor; just click and drag the references to after the punctuation.
 * I like how you added hyperlinks so the reader can explore related topics!
 * Good use of reliable sources!

This is definitely ready to move onto the article Mercedes López-Morales! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:20, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Feedback from Will
Hi - Great work on this! As Elysia said you have expertly used reliable sources. I don't have any urgent feedback - just something for future consideration. If you wanted to provide links to any research group she may be part of, or project website you could add an "External links" section above the reference section. Excellent work! Move what you have live whenever you like! Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:21, 29 November 2018 (UTC)
 * Per Will's feedback, external links actually go *below* the reference section (MOS:LAYOUT). Additionally, external links should not contain "Any search results pages, such as links to individual website searches, search engines, search aggregators, or RSS feeds". You can read more about the do/do nots of external links here. Basically, you can keep the external links section and find new content for it, or you can ditch the whole thing. Up to you :) Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:59, 4 December 2018 (UTC)

More Feedback
Hi - this looks really great! Please move this live whenever you're ready. I don't have any additional edits! Excellent work. Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 00:56, 5 December 2018 (UTC)