User talk:ILoveMath1989/sandbox2

Feedback from Elysia
Hi ILoveMath1989, it looks like you may have inadvertently removed references from the article when you copied it over? For example, the sentence in the article Katrin Wehrheim "Wehrheim completed her PhD in 2002, under the joint supervision of Dusa McDuff and Dietmar Salamon [de]." is cited, but in your version it is not. The sentences "Her PhD thesis in mathematics won the 2002 ETH medal" and "In 2010 she received the Presidential Career Award PECASE from Barack Obama in a ceremony at the White House" have two different citations in the live article. In your sandbox, there is no longer a citation after the first one, making it seem as if the content of both sentences is supported by the one ref. I haven't checked to make sure that is actually the case.

Don't feel like you need to "reinvent the wheel" so to speak for existing articles. If the content on the page is structurally okay and contains citations, then just go about adding to the page, being careful not to lose information such as citations. If and when you go about adding to this page, just move the pieces that are "new" to the article. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:22, 5 December 2018 (UTC)

Feedback from Will
Hi - Your additions look good to me. There are a few instances where your draft has been tagged with "citation needed." Just double check that when you move content live that everything that needs a citation has a citation. Best Will (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:24, 5 December 2018 (UTC)